Advisor review: changes or additions/deletions:
Some areas need improvement:
• You need to develop a separate sub-section for identifying your policy problem more concisely, including the nature of the problem (e.g., threat, challenge, or opportunity).
• In your analysis of Arab perceptions of the UAE-Israeli normalization, it is better to provide evidence to support your statements. This might include reference to public opinion surveys measuring Arab public opinion on that question.
• You need to identify the type of your policy gap across the three parameters of the no-policy gap, outdated policy gap, and implementation gap.
• You need to articulate the methodology of your research.
• You need to work on your proposed policy options, as the first and third options are almost identical. You must come up with three distinct policy options to be evaluated.
• You need to delineate your framework of evaluation. Which evaluation framework are you planning to apply to assess the feasibility of your policy options?
• You need to develop a more coherent sentence structure to ensure a consistent flow of ideas across the text.
• You have an excessive use of in-text citations across the text. You should only use it whenever necessary (i.e., paraphrasing an idea or quoting a statement).
• You should have a list of references.
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